tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post8644392781038165679..comments2024-01-26T13:36:51.551-08:00Comments on Writing and Living by Richard P. Hughes: Platform-Builders Campaigner Challenge #2writing and living by Richard P Hugheshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03814139767151989286noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-81524084356053546082011-10-10T17:13:21.593-07:002011-10-10T17:13:21.593-07:00Your piece is beautifully done. Short but every wo...Your piece is beautifully done. Short but every word counts to make a wonderful picture.<br /><br />#189Karen deBlieckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11833882790709316409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-61807885954288514212011-10-08T10:07:06.134-07:002011-10-08T10:07:06.134-07:00Lovely. Very visual.Lovely. Very visual.Holly Vancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10113438267020711966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-49775507995109677182011-09-30T15:37:52.211-07:002011-09-30T15:37:52.211-07:00Great job with the challenge! You worked those wor...Great job with the challenge! You worked those words in seamlessly.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-91185329788361946452011-09-29T11:12:27.501-07:002011-09-29T11:12:27.501-07:00crisp, succinct, poignant - lovely poem and love y...crisp, succinct, poignant - lovely poem and love your inspiration.Joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00633484787634197878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-5095235550685149792011-09-28T15:45:47.915-07:002011-09-28T15:45:47.915-07:00Beautiful. Read it a few times.Beautiful. Read it a few times.Joellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05813055817755602200noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-7093922256317720692011-09-28T05:25:30.238-07:002011-09-28T05:25:30.238-07:00Wow, you have some amazing lines in here. Great jo...Wow, you have some amazing lines in here. Great job with the challenge. I'm a new follower from the campaign and #127 for this challenge.Ciarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15628488753277495111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-58965743280182718932011-09-28T05:05:05.753-07:002011-09-28T05:05:05.753-07:00What a way to use all the words. Great poem.What a way to use all the words. Great poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12160669603997465454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-826447966859757472011-09-28T03:32:19.425-07:002011-09-28T03:32:19.425-07:00THat was lovely, Richard. I love the idea of seein...THat was lovely, Richard. I love the idea of seeing beauty from your own portrait. Off to vote for you now..... :)PK HREZOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650153097981426833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-25401045452001311522011-09-28T01:21:49.847-07:002011-09-28T01:21:49.847-07:00By the way, you are entry #117, not #118. :-)By the way, you are entry #117, not #118. :-)Elizabeth Varadan, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01708206753256682635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-87108951219506253702011-09-28T01:05:33.918-07:002011-09-28T01:05:33.918-07:00What a wonderful word painting, and the words were...What a wonderful word painting, and the words were used in an unobtrusive way, creating an image that echoes afterwards. Lovely job!Elizabeth Varadan, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01708206753256682635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-86671783441086303622011-09-27T11:53:22.354-07:002011-09-27T11:53:22.354-07:00This has to be the shortest entry I've read ye...This has to be the shortest entry I've read yet, and you still managed to get those words in there in an effective way. Genius, I say.<br /><br />Great job, Richard! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-51880996990432418172011-09-27T09:19:26.128-07:002011-09-27T09:19:26.128-07:00Very nicely done poetry! ; )Very nicely done poetry! ; )Sheri L. Swift, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08585820531737824211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-2562459923058807202011-09-27T08:51:28.057-07:002011-09-27T08:51:28.057-07:00I've never been good with these kinds of chall...I've never been good with these kinds of challenges. It's enough of a challenge for me to try to write my friend's memoir. I just left a comment on your FB page to thank you for your positive comment this morning on my blog in response to the excerpt I posted.<br /><br />Cheers to you, too!!<br /><a href="http://anncarbinebest.com/" rel="nofollow"><i>Ann Best, Author of In the Mirror, A Memoir of Shattered Secrets</i></a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-3335426629987217482011-09-26T21:53:35.792-07:002011-09-26T21:53:35.792-07:00Wow, you really made those words blend. Nice job. ...Wow, you really made those words blend. Nice job. Mine is #29Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-85573864776438553992011-09-26T18:07:19.805-07:002011-09-26T18:07:19.805-07:00The perspective you took was unique. I like that ...The perspective you took was unique. I like that you found a "synchronicity" between two art forms -- words and painting.Julie Farrarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08810771028650707072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-80334861814154268692011-09-26T16:53:45.263-07:002011-09-26T16:53:45.263-07:00This is a beautiful piece of writing. I love the e...This is a beautiful piece of writing. I love the ending: "A portrait of myself that is beautiful in a way that cannot be explained." So evocative!<br /><br />Mine is #3.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12314617048592538691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-4627835452783903652011-09-26T16:05:31.428-07:002011-09-26T16:05:31.428-07:00I really love prose poetry and this is a wonderful...I really love prose poetry and this is a wonderful example of it :) Great job! I'm a new follower by the way!<br /><br />(I'm entry #113)Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2789848305671189900.post-4153115961055180032011-09-26T12:42:45.313-07:002011-09-26T12:42:45.313-07:00"Within the disarray of flat space and broken..."Within the disarray of flat space and broken time emerges a harmonious synchronicity--a portrait of myself that is beautiful in a way that cannot be explained."<br /><br />Brilliant line.<br /><br />The funny thing is that Chagall's painting (and your entry) resonate with writers and artists alike.<br /><br />You did a fantastic job of capturing the spirit of the painting in your poem.F.E. Sewellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04222968586032981217noreply@blogger.com