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Excerpt from my novel Only The Lonely


            When their training ended, the Americans boarded trucks—the camions—that would take them to the front lines. When the camions neared the battlefield, the soldiers heard explosions in the distance. The trucks stopped along an invisible line in the countryside, disgorging their cargo. Winston’s platoon, along with several others, formed up a hundred yards from a thick stand of trees. The ground vibrated from an explosion, and dark-black smoke billowed from the far side of the trees.
            Mack Jones, a wiry lieutenant with tattoos of naked women on his forearms, yelled, “We’re going into the trenches. Keep your heads down; stay low. We’ll go into the reserve trenches first, then we’ll move to the front lines. Remember, the Boshes are trying to kill you. So keep your heads down.”
            The troops marched through the stand of trees. On the other side, opening out in front of them, the French and German trenches faced each other across narrow fields covered with long coils of barbed wire. The wind shifted and blew towards the troops, and the stench nearly gagged them. Winston coughed and covered his nose and mouth with his handkerchief.
            They scrambled down into a seven-foot-deep trench that made a hundred-and-fifty-foot-long groove through the ground. Bent over, Winston ran along the muddy duckboards, the blasts in the distance getting louder, the ground shaking harder. Mud splattered against his pant legs, sticking to the khaki material. He came to a much longer trench running perpendicular to the one he was in. Muddy-faced soldiers squatting there smirked and said, “Welcome to hell, mates.”
            “Watch out for the cooties,” said a British soldier, who had several teeth missing and a dirt-caked beard, laughing at the Americans as they slithered by.
            When Winston reached his station, he leaned back against the earthen wall, the wet soil soaking the seat of his pants. He and the others glared at each other as if they had been led into a trap.
            “Okay, this is going to be your home for a while,” Jones said. “Make yourselves comfortable, men.”
            The dirt trench was an ugly gray, the walls uneven, and the duckboards caked with mud. The stench from the latrines was nauseating. There was no place to sit except against the walls or on the fire step. There were shallow caves previous soldiers had dug that were shored up with pieces of timber. The caves were barely deep enough in the earth for a man to lie in.
The sun beat down on Winston as he waited, wondering what was going to happen next, explosions and gunfire farther away never stopping. An hour later, several French soldiers came along carrying rifles, handing one to each American.
            “This is your piece,” Lieutenant Jones shouted, holding up his rifle. “Make love to it. It might be the last piece you ever get.”

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